Copywriting – Mistakes to Avoid for Effective Copy

Let's take a look at the 7 Killer Copywriting Mistakes. And how you can avoid making these disastrous mistakes in your own copywriting.

Hint: Most copywriting mistakes center around the lack of value.

Focus on Value

The first thing we absolutely must discuss is value.

Value is the one thing you must constantly focus on in your sales copy if you want to be truly successful at the craft.

Value is what you are ultimately trying to offer your customers. Not necessarily monetary value, but some sort of benefit.

Remember, from start to finish, you must concentrate on what your product can do for the reader.

Copywriting Mistake #1

Lack of Value in the Headline

Everyone who knows anything at all about copywriting knows that the headline is absolutely the most important part of your sales copy.

Get the headline wrong, and you’ll lose 75-80% of your traffic right off the bat.

(Yes, that’s a real statistic. About 5 times as many people read a sales letter’s headline as read the body!)

Your headline should tell someone exactly what the product can do for them right off the bat.

It should not, contrary to popular opinion, pose a question – at least not without a corresponding answer included in the headline itself.

Rather, it should tell someone exactly what they will get right off the bat.

Examples:

BAD – What Would You Do If Someone Broke Into Your House?

GOOD – Get Our Free Report And Learn How To Stop A Burglar Dead In His Tracks!

BAD – Do You Want To Lose Weight Quickly?

GOOD – Lose 10 Pounds In 10 Days With Our Breakthrough System!

These headlines (the GOOD headlines) let people immediately know what results they can expect upon use of the product.

Ultimately, the job of the headline is to get people to read the rest of the copy (or at least skip right to the call-to-action where they can take that desired action.)

If your headline successfully does its job of conveying value.

Copywriting Mistake #2

Focusing on “Action Words” in the Call-to-Action

Many copywriters have read about the importance of using “action words” to get people to take a desired action.

Such as buying a product, adding an item to their shopping cart, or subscribing to an email newsletter. And using those words is a good idea in some areas of your copywriting.

However, too many people have taken the “action word” thing too far. And are using them in their calls-to-action as their primary focus.

Remember, we’re focusing on value. We want to let people know what they can GET at every step of the process in our copy.

So instead of focusing on action words, focus on value words.

Value words let people know they can GET something.

In fact, GET is one of the most powerful value words there is!

Instead of saying “Click Here” say “Get Your Report Now”.

Instead of saying “Join Now” say “Get Free Access Now”.

By focusing on your value words, you will find your conversions increase significantly.

And more people will respond to your copy in the way you want them to than if you use those oft-touted “action words”.

Copywriting Mistake #3

Not Knowing Your Audience

A lot of people are certain they know their market inside and out. They’re so sure, in fact, that they do little to no research.

And instead write copy based on what they believe their audience thinks and feels. The trouble is… what if you do this and you’re wrong?

Market research is vital. There’s a reason why mega corporations spend huge amounts of their marketing budgets on research.

They do all types of research, including uncovering their market demographics and focus groups that test individual products.

You need to know your market inside and out not only to make sure you’re writing the right stuff. But to make sure you’re NOT writing the WRONG stuff.

Never assume to know your audience. Make sure you know it!

Copywriting Mistake #4

Bland Copy That Is Hard To Read

I’m not talking about boring copy here, although that would certainly be a big mistake.

I’m talking about copywriting that is nothing but a bunch of monochromatic words bunched up together on a page.

If you’ve ever read sales copy like this, you’ll understand how hard it is on the eyes.

And how frustrating it is to try to read a solid wall of text with little to nothing to break it up.

Make sure you are making your copywriting look as interesting as possible by adding interesting elements to the text.

Use elements such as bold, color, underline, italics, etc.

Bullets are a great way to break up large chunks of text into parts that are easier to digest:

-Use bullets to list various features.

-Use bullets to list benefits.

-Use bullets to make important text stand out.

Don’t forget that you can also use bold, underlines, etc. to make text stand out within those bullet points!!!

Copywriting Mistake #5

Useless Images

Images are incredibly useful in copywriting when they are highly targeted to the topic and make sense.

However, if you use random images simply because they were all you could find that would fit with your topic.

You’re actually hurting your sales copy more than you’re helping it.

Disjointed images only serve to confuse potential customers. They see an image and wonder, “What does this mean?”

Just because you understand how a particular image fits in with your message doesn’t mean your reader will.

Simply inserting images for the sake of having those all-important images in your copywriting is not helpful.

Be sure that the images you use help convey your message. Make sure those images are immediately recognizable.

And that almost everyone you encounter would immediately understand what that image was meant to say.

Copywriting Mistake #6

Using Too Many (Or Too Few) Words

Everyone seems to think that longer copy is always better, but in many cases longer copy can absolutely kill conversions.

I’m not sure where the trend started – the belief that longer copy is always better than shorter.

Maybe it started because all those that sell copywriting who charge per page. Tend to craft longer copy to justify their inflated prices or make more per client. Who knows?

Sometimes longer copy works. Some products take more copy to sell than others.

A product that costs $1,997 is probably going to take a lot more convincing than a product that costs $19.97. (Although that isn’t always the case!)

You probably don’t need 30 pages of copy to sell a $0.99 eBook.

And you probably need more than a half page to sell a $1,997 video course with coaching.

But that may not always be true. Some markets respond better to one type of copy than another, and some products need more copy than others.

This brings us to our 7th and final copywriting mistake…

Copywriting Mistake #7

Failing to Test

Testing is one of the most important elements of copywriting.

In fact, it could be said that testing is even more important than the headline. Because if you don’t test, how can you even be certain your headline is up to par?

You can use split-testing software to make your testing easier, but it’s not absolutely necessary. If you have a decent amount of traffic, you can test one version. And then test a second version manually and compare results.

Test various elements such as your headline, call-to-action, graphics, and bullet points.

Even your guarantee should be tested.

Once you’ve hit a conversion ratio you’re happy with, you could stop testing.

But you never know when you might exceed your goals with one small tweak!

Conclusion

Copywriting isn’t as cut-and-dry as you might think. The fact is, there are a lot of mistakes one can make when creating any type of copy.

When you’re crafting any kind of copy, the primary thing you need to remember is that you must concentrate on value.

Everything you say should point to the value of your product or service. Not on what you want the reader to do. Not on what you think they want to hear. And not on what someone else has told you to say. But on the immediate value the reader will receive when they take the action you want them to take.

To Your Success,

Joshua